tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post2494373006089410444..comments2023-06-14T06:27:41.187-07:00Comments on Gham-e-Agahi (Grief of Awareness): Chapter no. 1: The Beginning (IV)Urooj Malikhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13496631110760489965noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-59534097571871890532010-09-10T21:27:15.031-07:002010-09-10T21:27:15.031-07:00Connie, thanks for giving my writings your preciou...Connie, thanks for giving my writings your precious time. I am also very much interested in the theme. Your words really matter for me and are a source of encouragement for me always.<br /><br />Eid Mubarak.Urooj Malikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13496631110760489965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-51726468421385653732010-09-10T13:49:35.502-07:002010-09-10T13:49:35.502-07:00Yes, I intend! Missed one of my writing group sess...Yes, I intend! Missed one of my writing group sessions & was late for the other. Friend just moved in which meant whole rooms changed around...but no more excuses. After a weekend camping plan to get busier on this because I am so taken with your writing talent and especially interested in the theme. Keep up the great work and maybe you'll incorporate insights and incidents from your current activities with your well-organized team reaching out to the helpless ones?CNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10877484524704475807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-15612071398845304392010-09-07T09:22:32.889-07:002010-09-07T09:22:32.889-07:00Connie and Riz, thank you so much for reading it.
...Connie and Riz, thank you so much for reading it.<br /><br />Connie, I will wait for you to read it again and discuss about the post.<br /><br />Riz, keep visiting my blog.Urooj Malikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13496631110760489965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-49715202640359894852010-09-07T08:31:37.815-07:002010-09-07T08:31:37.815-07:00Cool! my (both) eyes are on Ilaaf now!! :DCool! my (both) eyes are on Ilaaf now!! :DMuhammad Rizwan Jabbarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09148411855550576465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-83075059554637617832010-09-06T23:08:16.850-07:002010-09-06T23:08:16.850-07:00So sorry to be behind not realizing how very far a...So sorry to be behind not realizing how very far along you are. I intend Insha Allah to be back this weekend to spend more time reading the refreshing lines here carefully...<br /><br />Alas, I will need to wait to read some of your work to my writing group so patience with us please.<br /><br />Don't let anything stop you from writing...many chapters can be modified later and you are in a creative flow which nothing should stop.<br /><br />So glad you are doing this in English also.<br /><br />With my own writing, I'm taking long breaks to read books on writing...ones in some cases I've read long ago...If and when you get "stuck" then we can share some of these tho'ts...for now...don't get distracted worrying about any correction or perfection when your writing is so alive!CNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10877484524704475807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-21202610149845639502010-09-06T11:13:12.598-07:002010-09-06T11:13:12.598-07:00Sir Akhtar, thank you so much. I was expecting som...Sir Akhtar, thank you so much. I was expecting some advices for the betterment of my writings but anyhow this encouragement is so valuable for me. The character of Ilaaf will be more expressive and we will know further realities of his personality later on.Urooj Malikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13496631110760489965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-66797446812572324182010-09-06T10:35:09.716-07:002010-09-06T10:35:09.716-07:00I think you have developed Ilaaf’s character quite...I think you have developed Ilaaf’s character quite well, characterization is the most tedious and skillful job in a novel, I would like to see this character now taking shape also with some unique mannerism outside and inside, this would provide depth and multi dimensions to this key character, which has many aspirations and likeliness, which you want to see in this world.<br /><br />The poem and its translation are beautiful and impressive. This chapter is quite good and you have worked hard which is quite evident.Akhtar Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09635876866214567866noreply@blogger.com