tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post3876766507082655836..comments2023-06-14T06:27:41.187-07:00Comments on Gham-e-Agahi (Grief of Awareness): Chapter no. 10: The Incident (VI)Urooj Malikhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13496631110760489965noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-12236968808336147052011-08-11T22:08:30.340-07:002011-08-11T22:08:30.340-07:00Sadia, thank you for reading, liking and raising a...Sadia, thank you for reading, liking and raising an amazing question.<br /><br />I think I am not able to answer this question well, let Ilaaf and Qandeel answer your question themselves. <br /><br />By the way, how can you say that Qandeel always take the "better" of the two protagonists? While I think this time Ilaaf took the better one.Urooj Malikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13496631110760489965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-23298905017494107302011-08-11T22:01:21.267-07:002011-08-11T22:01:21.267-07:00Your writing skills are commendable, urooj, but wh...Your writing skills are commendable, urooj, but why did Qandeel have to witness the accident herself? Why does Ilaaf have to be in a sorry state of affairs all the time? Why couldnt it be Qandeel who knocked down the three women and then Ilaaf would have seen her? Why does Qandeel have to always take the "better" outfit of the two protagonists?Wordsmithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07648889608212784627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-52488620970264062702011-08-10T01:28:15.918-07:002011-08-10T01:28:15.918-07:00Sir Akhtar, and Peerless, thank you for reading an...Sir Akhtar, and Peerless, thank you for reading and liking the post.Urooj Malikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13496631110760489965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-19862830472149102922011-08-09T10:25:46.153-07:002011-08-09T10:25:46.153-07:00I always read the novel as I am a part of it; I wo...I always read the novel as I am a part of it; I would say that after reading last two episodes I am very sad. Perfectly narrated tale of such a tragic incident which may be the most appalling incident of the novel and a beginning of a grief would so deeply be felt by the readers. How you have written the whole tragedy, I feel as I was standing at Burns Road when the incident happened, an ultimate success as a writer. It’s a masterclass from you Urooj, every reader must find it as appalling as I did. Great going, keep it up.Shahid Majeedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930952272257574606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126887926610754943.post-68281383102329892011-08-08T10:34:09.287-07:002011-08-08T10:34:09.287-07:00Crime scene and the details are narrated exception...Crime scene and the details are narrated exceptionally through the witness Maryam and the emotional upheaval felt by Qandeel and Yousuf Mairaj are also very well depicted. Felt the chill and the turbulence of the accident and the also the sadness that it conveyed.Akhtar Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09635876866214567866noreply@blogger.com